WWW:
- Looking over your blog, I am pleased that you have made a really good start on all Evaluation questions Jamie - your responses are looking very good so far
- There are some good attempts to make posts visual in some way, and your written comments show a generally good grasp of what each question requires of you
EBI:
- To improve, and move that standard of your work towards a B-A grade, you should come back to your posts and continue to develop them Jamie.
- I checked Q. 4 and 6 carefully, as these were the 2 that we agreed on in last Monday's lesson. There are some developments that I'd like you to do to improve each...
- Q. 4 is currently Very Good, and I think Prezi is a good, creative way to explore your target audience, but this could be moved to 'Excellent' through the inclusion of screen grabs from your own film sequence with added explanation about why your film is suited to the types of males you describe as your target audience - also - go back and proof read to check spelling carefully
- Q. 6 - I think you need to come back to this and develop it using screen cast software (like JING) to talk through how you use technologies everyday (talk through yourself opneing up iMovie to edit, blogger to develop coursework, Live Type to work on titles, etc, etc... Use 'technology' to explain how you are developing your skills in technology.
Overall effort for Q. 4 and 6
GD - with IN (improvement needed) to secure higher end of Lev 4
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